How do you like the flow and language of this one?

I will be honest. poems are best composed when they come they deep within the poet. also, when the poet puts there words together, if just half of the people walk away from reading your type poem maybe even not comprehending what they just read; but, instead they take a look at how a poem such as this and instead of trying to make any sense of it; they maybe and to be honest hopefully come up with thier own interpretations and that makes for a pretty darn good poet! I came up with my own interptetation and I related it to my childhood. so, thank you! hope to hear more of your poems